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Wind of nostalgia

As a wind of nostalgia engulf me,
My head is spinning,
My stomach is aching,
My heart is pounding,

I feel the chill and excitement,
I feel the warmth and sweetness,
I feel the happiness flying away,

As a wind of nostalgia engulf me,
I feel all the feelings coming back to me,
I feel all the suppressed love bursting out,
I feel all of my senses alert in your wait,

I think I will cry,
This nostalgia is just too strong,
This love is just too big,

I have to kiss you again,
On the cheek like a gentlemen,
On the hand like a lord,
On the lips like a lover,

This wind is pushing you away,
But the nostalgia it brought will stay,
My heart aches,

All the butterflies in my tummy want to fly away,
All of my being wants to fly to you,
All that I want is to love you,
Do you agree?
This poem has been inspired by my love for someone very dear.
She will recognize herself.

Hope she will agree, but reality is cruel...
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LadyxXxBug Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Been there...but reality is cruel, I agree.
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
indeed, thanks for your comment.
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LadyxXxBug Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
Ditto!
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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akiko-sama Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011
This is the perfect poem to describe japanese dramas xDDD (animes and mangas aswell)
I really like how you made it seem that the feeings are growing stronger and at the same time, they are causing an even bigger hole where you're burrying yourself alive

I actually got goosebumps (in a good sence) while reading it
It makes me think of a manga I am curently reading called Strobe edge
The main girl loves a guy and confesses to him but he has a girlfrind so he can't accept her confession
but the girl keeps on loving him, staying firnds which makes her happy but at the same time she feels so much pain!
so this poem really catches the feelings of love well

but that's what I think

also the idea of using a wind of nostalgia is briliant
while reading this poem it just makes you imagine it in pictures!

Really really well done!
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well considering to whom it is destined it could actually be a japanese drama, lol ^^
I think you've described the feeling pretty well. I actually am in pain, but I'm ok with that, I like to torture myself with love, lol

That's a nice "side effect" if I may describe it like that...
Well my friend you've just summarized my love / friend relation with the person this poem is destined to, well done!

You think well, as always ^^ Love your comments!

It does indeed, I really took this idea, because I felt (and still feel) engulfed in this nostalgia/torture/love/friend thing... ^^^

Thank you! I'll keep writing things like that then :D
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akiko-sama Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
true hehe :)
you masochist! ;P hehe

well I always have nice ideas and thoughts :D hehe

keep doing it! I support you~
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hehe ^^
I am indeed when it comes to love.

You have indeed, that's why I like your comments so much.

Thank you :D
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AshiaRyoku Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Student Writer
I hope that she loves this :)
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm sure she will
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