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The wind

The wind,
This invisible force,
As peaceful and appreciated as a gentle flow,
As strong and destructive as a hurricane.

I'm just standing there enjoying the nice weather and wind,
I think that this should be done more often,
As very relaxing indeed.

Can't you see I'm happy?
Can't you just stop harming?
Harming this beautiful nature who gave birth to wind?

The wind,
Useless,
Yet absolutely necessary.

I love you wind,
And this is for you,
Take those words and make them fly away.
This was inspired by my latest :+fav: of [link]
I really like :icontohruhondasan: so go check her gallery, it's really worth it.
Hope you like this poem as much as I did writing it.
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Sunlight-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
ah.... again a beatiful poem.
I like the wind, too. Of course... it's my element.
Do you write about the other elements too??? I'm waiting for it ^.^
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Well I could write about the other elements too, I'll just have to be inspired :P
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Sunlight-Angel Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok, then I'll wish lots of inspiration for you ^.^
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, you're kind :D
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akiko-sama Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009
sooo pretty!! it sounds so calm and yet the part where you say "can't you stop harming him" is really angsty which I toootaly love <3

it makes me want to draw a "flowing" picture right away... but the only thing that comes to my mind is the picture that Tohru-san drew >///<

realllly great! :heart::heart:
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah it's a really nice transition indeed, I was really well inspired that day!
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TohruHondaSan Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009
whaaaaaaaaaaa i like it so much~~!!!!
thank youu <33333333333~~!! that is really awesome~!! makes me feel really happy~~!
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! I'm happy that you like it!
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