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Rain by =tursiops33:icontursiops33:

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Rain

It purifies you,
It hits you,
It's essential,

Rain can do so much,
But is often ignored,
Treated as a disease bringer,

Stay up in the rain,
And you'll feel it's presence,
Stay longer,
And you'll feel it's weight,

When rain falls,
Umbrellas opens,
Like a shelter,

A shelter for your hair,
A shelter for your makeup,
A shelter for futility's,

Embracing rain,
Is like embracing simplicity,
You've nothing to hide,

Feel its touch,
Feel the life bringer,
Feel the simplicity.
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This poem was inspired by the picture of :icontohruhondasan: that you can find here: [link]

Hope you enjoy it!

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:iconlyra-puu:
~lyra-puu May 18, 2009, 2:45:53 PM
"Stay up in the rain,
And you'll feel it's presence,
Stay longer,
And you'll feel it's weight,"

My favorite part. It's really strong

--
"If you don't believe in dragons,
It is curiously true
That the dragons you disparage
Choose to not believe in you".
:icontursiops33:
=tursiops33 May 18, 2009, 3:08:38 PM
Thank you!
I really like that part too.

--
Poems in english at: [link]
Poèmes en français [link]
Dolphins at: [link]

We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
:icontohruhondasan:
~TohruHondaSan May 18, 2009, 7:24:32 PM
WOWWWW it's awesome!!! thakyou so much <3<3 :hug:!!!

--
:rose: :butterflytwo: :blackrose: 私は愛猫家 I love Kyo kun 吸血鬼かりん :blackrose: :butterflytwo: :rose:
:icontursiops33:
=tursiops33 May 19, 2009, 3:27:36 AM
Thank you! You're welcome!

--
Poems in english at: [link]
Poèmes en français [link]
Dolphins at: [link]

We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
:iconakiko-sama:
=akiko-sama May 28, 2009, 9:26:40 AM
Stay even longer
and you'll get a cold/ill

;P;P;P;P;P

hhaha joke but I just couldn't resist writting this down xDD

but the poem is really pretty
tho I don't like rain all that much for a simple reason: everytime it rains I have to use an umbrella and everytime the umbrella suffers more

my umbrellas usually don't last more than 1-2 months ;___;

but yet again really great poem!

--
When you cease to dream, you cease to live!
:icontursiops33:
=tursiops33 May 28, 2009, 10:30:04 AM
Yeah well, here in ireland it depends on the wind, if the wind is strong unmbrellas don't last for more than 1 day. if there is no wind then they last the same as in other countries :P

Thanks for the comment as always!

--
Poems in english at: [link]
Poèmes en français [link]
Dolphins at: [link]

We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
:iconakiko-sama:
=akiko-sama May 28, 2009, 1:01:51 PM
haha
well... here aswell... but my umbrella usually also ends up being squezed though a to narow door x'D

uuups....

--
When you cease to dream, you cease to live!
:icontursiops33:
=tursiops33 May 28, 2009, 2:29:55 PM
poor umbrella...

--
Poems in english at: [link]
Poèmes en français [link]
Dolphins at: [link]

We are all angels with only one wing and we can only fly by embracing each other.
:iconakiko-sama:
=akiko-sama May 30, 2009, 2:17:08 AM
indeed ;___;

--
When you cease to dream, you cease to live!
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