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Pwnd

Get pwnd,
what a strange word,
What a strange thing it is,
To get pwned.

It was a day,
Just like any other,
Sunny and beautiful,

She woke up,
Started to dress,
Everything was going well.

Then suddently,
Her tunnel of love,
Was more like a volcano,

The pain was excruciating,
She immediately had to,
Get all clothes off,

Just while she did,
Her friends just arrived,
Snapping a picture of her,

It was shameful,
They all saw her tunnel of love,
Her worst day ever!

She still needed,
To extinguish the flames,
That were consuming her,

She was struggling with water,
It was having little effect,
Though she didn't have anything else.

In the back giggles and laughter,
Continued to roar,
As her shame continued.

Finally it was over,
Finally she liked it,
Finally she was fully shamed.
This was a commission for :iconladymariah1234: she wanted something that represented her when her friends made a prank on her by putting pepper in her panties.
I like challenges and here is one I had to take on :P
I usually don't do poems that talk about genitals and stuff like that, but there's a first time for everything ^^
So enjoy, and tell me what you think of it.
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pebtos Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010
Fun poem, it needs the artist's comment for the final twist though. :-)

Thanks for the llama!? o.O
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Fun indeed. Welcome for the llama.
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HALsurfer Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
With your comment it makes sense.
But I liked it before reading it also, so what to say...

It is a great piece of work for such a hard topic.
After all, it is really hard to not really tell what happened and simply only telling what she know at the moment.

GREAT!
=^.^=
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for such nice comments :D
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HALsurfer Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome
=^.^=
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quandry247 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010   Digital Artist
Dear gods - that must-'av' smarted.

I'm guessing you know the etymology of the expression pwnd, but, I'm going to relate it anyway because that stuff interests me.

"Pwnd" come from "Owned" which is an truncation of the American jail slang phrase "I own your ass".

In internet gaming server chat a constriction of owned - "Ownd" was often used to declare victory over an opponent, until the gaming authority's decided to ban the word from appearing in their chat due to its unsavoury links to jail talk.

So, the creative and undeniably victorious gamers (probably still behind bars) used the next letter in the alphabet - and qwerty keyboard - instead:

Pwnd.
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't know all of that, thank you for teaching me something new today ^^
Keep commenting, I really appreciate it!
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blackcatsrule Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010  Student General Artist
I didn't get it completely until I read the artist comments. xDDD Smart.
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tursiops33 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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akiko-sama Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2010
hehehheheheh

nice one! and I actually know the story behind it and you really interpreted it nicely!

really well done!
tho still kinda embarassing haha ^//////^
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