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It stirs the soul

Stir for a bit,
Gain wonder,

Stir for a bit more,
Gain insight,

Stir for even a bit more,
Gain ideas,

Put everything together,
and you'll get passion,

Then you'll be able,
To defy the impossible,

Then you'll be able,
To imagine the future,

And finally...

You'll be able,
To change the world,

All this will stir you soul,
This is... TED.
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A little something inspired by this video: [link]
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~blackcatsrule Apr 3, 2012  Student General Artist
This is so epic. lol The TED part made me lol a bit but nonetheless awesome.
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~tursiops33 Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah it's a bit unexpected.
If you have time you should check the ted.com website, it got really interesting stuff, I'm really into it.
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:iconimowmo:
gosh turisops33 ur poems just keep getting betta and betta!!
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~tursiops33 Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you my friend! Really appreciated!
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:iconakiko-sama:
Loooooool this is kinda epic in a way...
it was "intense" and pretty, actually really lovely until the very last verse

Tho in a way it didn't ruin it, it just adds this awesome edge of a nice comic ending!

Really cool!

and welcome back!!!! it's been ages since you've uploaded a poem!
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~tursiops33 Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well now that I read it again it's true that the end makes a little "cut" into the poem, but I still like it and I'm glad you do.

And thanks for welcoming me back, I haven't been very inspired lately, too many things on my mind...
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:iconakiko-sama:
Yeah it's like those... jokes that make something sound really dirty while explaining it. This poem reminded me of that!
it's a really nice change imo so definitely great job!

Yeah I know how you feel... had lots of school related and life related thoughts storming in my head so I've also kinda negleccted DA x'D
keep up the good work, don't mind the pace, just do it! :)
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~tursiops33 Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Strange... that's really the last thing I would think about when reading this poem.
Did you check out the video that inspired this poem?

Indeed, I just write when I feel like it :D
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:iconakiko-sama:
Have no time now
gotta do a PPT presentation and learn all I wrote until 6pm... so 3 h left...
*and I'm still roaming around the interwebs sigh...*
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~tursiops33 Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
When you'll see it you'll understand why I wrote what I wrote...
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