Yeah it's like those... jokes that make something sound really dirty while explaining it. This poem reminded me of that! it's a really nice change imo so definitely great job!
Yeah I know how you feel... had lots of school related and life related thoughts storming in my head so I've also kinda negleccted DA x'D keep up the good work, don't mind the pace, just do it!
If you have time you should check the ted.com website, it got really interesting stuff, I'm really into it.
it was "intense" and pretty, actually really lovely until the very last verse
Tho in a way it didn't ruin it, it just adds this awesome edge of a nice comic ending!
Really cool!
and welcome back!!!! it's been ages since you've uploaded a poem!
And thanks for welcoming me back, I haven't been very inspired lately, too many things on my mind...
it's a really nice change imo so definitely great job!
Yeah I know how you feel... had lots of school related and life related thoughts storming in my head so I've also kinda negleccted DA x'D
keep up the good work, don't mind the pace, just do it!
Did you check out the video that inspired this poem?
Indeed, I just write when I feel like it
gotta do a PPT presentation and learn all I wrote until 6pm... so 3 h left...
*and I'm still roaming around the interwebs sigh...*