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I sink

Each day I sink a bit more

The first day I just knee in water
I pray that everything I'm hearing
That everything I'm seeing
That everything I'm feeling
Is just an illusion.

The second day I lay down
Water starts covering my ears
So I don't hear all those beautiful things

Then water starts covering my mouth
So I'm unable to speak
To yell at the dark
To shot curses at the void

Now the water is covering my eyes
So that i can't see your beauty anymore
I'm blind to everything that could cause me joy
I'm blind to everything that could cause me pain

Finally the water covers my nose
So that I can't breath anymore
Why breath without you?
Why live if I can't see you?
Why live of I can't hear your sweet words?

Why live if I can't say I love you?
Why live if I can't see your beauty anymore?
Why live?
Why breath?

I will lay down and keep sinking
Rejoin the darkness
Be crushed by the pressure
And then just vanish.
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Inspired by a little comic I'm reading at the moment.
No need to tell you it's a gloomy comic...
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~Bewildered-Soul Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:happycry:This is simply amazing, this is a great piece:clap:
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~tursiops33 Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you really appreciated!
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~Bewildered-Soul Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure:aww:
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Mood: Content ~Cookie-Ice Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh... I cried... :iconinublushplz: I loved it though. It was amazing!! :)
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~tursiops33 Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah it's very emotional, I'm glad you like it.
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Mood: Happy ~Cookie-Ice Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't like it...

I love it... :)
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~tursiops33 Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well even better :D
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Mood: Content ~Cookie-Ice Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Exactly.
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